pantoum

in my attempt to write a pantoum (because i was asked to) i came up with this:

BANK OF LINES
dizzy and spinning in our minds

our hearts fell to the ground
holding hands and laughing
making our way down
we landed softly in the grass
the earth gave a breathy sigh
our weight combined collapsed the soil
we embraced each other against the sky

Vertigo

dizzy and spinning in our minds
our hearts fell to the ground
holding hands and laughing
making our way down

our hearts fell to the ground
we landed softly in the grass
making our way down
the earth gave a breathy sigh

we landed softly in the grass
our weight combined collapsed the soil
the earth gave a breathy sigh
we embraced each other against the sky

our weight combined collapsed the soil
making our way down
dizzy and spinning in our minds
we landed softly in the grass

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